Question

如今你已經是初三的學生了，但你發(fā)現(xiàn)同學之間的溝通少了。于是你在班里的板報上呼吁同學間應加強溝通，請以溝通的重要性為題寫一篇約80字的文章，內容包括：

1. 溝通是必要的，也是重要的；

2. 溝通有很多種方式，如：語言，眼神交流，肢體語言，手勢等；

3. 溝通帶來的多種好處：可以幫助同學增進友誼，可以共同解決學習上的難題，可以減少大家的誤解(misunderstanding)……

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days.I think it is not good for our studies. Because ……

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Communication is Important

We are the students in Grade Three now. but I find we are lack of communication these days. I think it is not good for our studies. Because communication is very necessary as well as important/ Communication is very necessary, and it is very important, too. And there are many ways of communication, such as words, making eye contact, body language, hand gestures, and so on.. Also, communication is very useful among us. It can make our friendships stronger and stronger. We can do with our difficulties with communication. Communication can be reduced our misunderstanding each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求以溝通的重要性為題寫一篇80字的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細，動筆前應根據(jù)材料內容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關鍵單詞等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱較為復雜，注意主謂語之間數(shù)的問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。

【亮點說明】文章多處使用具有連接意義的詞如because、as well as、and、also等等，使文章語義通順，符合邏輯關系。

考點：提綱作文。