Question

請(qǐng)以“My Best Friend”為題寫一篇短文，用形容詞和副詞的比較級(jí)和最高級(jí)介紹一下你最好的朋友。字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)到70-80詞以上，字跡清晰、工整。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，緊扣主題。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I have a good friend. She is my best friend. Her name is Linda. In some ways we look the same. But in other ways we are different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her. We both like reading. She is good at English. But I am good at Chinese.  She is the best runner in our class and I’m the best swimmer.We often help each other.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及形容詞比較級(jí)，最高級(jí)等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: in other ways在其它方面；……than……比……怎么樣；be good at擅長(zhǎng)做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。