Question

根據(jù)表格，寫一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生日常生活習(xí)慣的調(diào)查報(bào)告。（不少于80詞）

Activities,	How many students,	How often,
exercise	all	an hour every day
eat fruit and drink milk	90℅	every day
eat junk food	7℅	Two or three times a week
drink coffee	no
sleep	most	Eight or nine hours every night

Here are the results of the students’ activity survey in our class. All students exercise

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Here are the results of the students’ activity survey in our class. All students exercise an hour every day.It’s good for health.Most students eat fruit and drink milk every day.It’s a good habit.Most students sleep eight or nine hours every night.That’s right.Some students eat junk food two or three times a week.It’s bad for our health.No student drink coffee.It’s Ok.

【解析】

試題分析：在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括五方面的內(nèi)容。另外，寫作時(shí)，還需注意語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者從提綱的五個(gè)方面，講述了學(xué)生們的大概情況。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Most students sleep eight or nine hours every night.That’s right.Some students eat junk food two or three times a week等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。