Question

書面表達（15分）

假如你Dave，請根據(jù)表格信息介紹自己，可適發(fā)揮。

要求：語句通順，語意連貫，語法正確。大約80詞左右。

Name	Dave	Age	13
Appearance（外貌）	中等個子，偏瘦，黑色短發(fā)
Hobbies（愛好）	聽音樂，打籃球 …
上周末活動	忙碌高興	周六上午做作業(yè)；下午和父母開車去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打籃球；下午聽音樂……

My name is Dave. I’m 13.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.

Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者寫自我介紹和上個周末的活動情況。小作者把要求寫的幾點都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。小作者把列舉的要點都寫了進去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的短語和句型，如On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading. 這些句子使文章添色不少。

考點：表格提綱類作文。