Question

請(qǐng)寫一篇介紹你理想中的學(xué)校的作文，須包含下列要點(diǎn)，

1. 學(xué)校在早晨9點(diǎn)開始上課，下午3點(diǎn)放學(xué)。我們有足夠的時(shí)間可以去參加課外活動(dòng)。

2. 學(xué)校有一個(gè)很大的食堂，里面有各種新鮮和健康的食物。

3. 學(xué)校一邊有一個(gè)公園，公園是個(gè)休息的好地方。另一邊有一個(gè)博物館。

4. 老師們對(duì)我們很親切，我們每天只有半個(gè)小時(shí)的家作，周末甚至沒有作業(yè)

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Ideal School

My ideal school stars at 9:00 a.m.. and finishes at 3:00 p.m. We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities.

My ideal school has a very big dining hall. There are different kinds of fresh and healthy food in it.

There is a park on one side of the school and a museum on the other side. The park is a good place to rest in.

The teachers are very kind to us. We only have half an hour of homework every day. We don't even have homework at weeekends.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: take part in參加；different kinds of不同種類的；be kind to對(duì)…友好；We have enough time to take part in the after-school activities. 我們有足夠的時(shí)間可以去參加課外活動(dòng)等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。