Question

書面表達(dá) ( 本題滿分20分 )

假如你是Mike, 最近你校正在招募 “青少年工作者”（the youth worker）, 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示，寫一封推薦信給校長，推薦你的老師Mr. Wu.

Personal information and personalities	1. 80后(in the 1980s)英語老師, 屬虎 2. 喜歡綠色，綠色代表自然，給人能量 3. 精力充沛，快樂自信，有耐心， 善于傾聽， 樂于助人 …
事跡介紹	吳老師是對(duì)我影響最大的人，因?yàn)椤��? Mike自己曾經(jīng)遇到的煩惱……. 吳老師的建議…….

要求：1. 須包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù)90詞左右，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 條理清晰，語意連貫，字跡工整。

Dear Principal,

I’m writing to recommend Mr. Wu to be our school youth worker.

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I think that Mr. Wu is the most suitable person to be the youth worker. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Mike

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr Smith,

How are you these days? Today I would like to recommend our teacher Mr. Wu as the youth worker.he is my English teacher, he is a tiger, was born after 80s.He likes green, because green represents nature, It can give people the energy

3.他是一個(gè) 精力充沛的人，他快樂自信，有耐心， 善于傾聽， 樂于助人 …

he is an energetic man, he is self-confidence and patient, He is good at listening and willing to help others...

Mr Wu is the most influential person to me, because I was poor in English in the past.Mr Wu helped me with my English.He told me not to give it up.I think that Mr. Wu is the most suitable person to be the youth worker. I hope that you agree with me.

Yours sincerely

Mike

【解析】

試題分析： 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封電子郵件。由于給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)運(yùn)用正確。文中分兩部分對(duì)吳老師進(jìn)行了介紹，認(rèn)為他是最合適的人選。還恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用了些短語和句式，如 It can give people the energy;He told me not to give it up等為文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。