Question

書面表達(15分)

Ⅴ.每個人都有自己的愛好，根據你的愛好以My hobby為話題，寫一篇英語作文，不要使用自己的真實姓名。80-100個詞匯。

My Hobby

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Answer 1

My hobby

Everyone has his own hobby, it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music, though I'm not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . When I am angry with something , it also can make me happyagain. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.等，When I am in trouble等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。