Question

為配合我市開(kāi)展“創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活動(dòng)，學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave Well”為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽�，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。

提示：1. 衣著整潔；待人有禮，樂(lè)于助人；2. 遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅燈；

3. 保護(hù)環(huán)境，不亂扔垃圾；4.補(bǔ)充兩句個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。

參考詞匯：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守) the traffic rules;

要求:(1)內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐條翻譯；

(2)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。

（3）詞數(shù)：80詞左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

                             How to Behave Well?

     In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in our life.

     First, we should keep our clothes clean and tidy. Be polite and friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. Then, our city should be kept clean every day. Don’t throw rubbish everywhere. Finally, we should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more and more beautiful in the future.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)出順序的詞來(lái)表達(dá)文意更清楚。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文進(jìn)行了較為全面的說(shuō)明，能用簡(jiǎn)短的詞匯表達(dá)出提綱的內(nèi)容，并且進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)奶幚�，�?zhǔn)確的添加自己的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。