Question

書面表達(dá)：
今年四月份，市啟動(dòng)了“文明餐桌行動(dòng)”，號(hào)召全體市民“文明用餐，節(jié)儉惜福”。請(qǐng)以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

waste too much   eat up all the food    eat junk food      eat a balanced diet

Answer 1

Aiming at some bad eating habits among the citizens, our government has taken some actions to urge people to save food and eat healthily. What we can do is listed as follows.
Wasting too much is quite common nowadays. The food that people didn’t eat up in the restaurants is just poured or dropped in the trash bins, which is a serious waste. Instead, we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money. Besides, junk food is something popular among young people. In fact, it really does harm to our health. So it’s really necessary for us to eat a balanced diet. Only when we eat healthily, can we be energetic enough to study and work well.
All in all, keeping a good habit in eating is something necessary for us to do, which can save food and make us eat healthily. So, let’s do it from now!  

試題分析：本文的寫作首先說(shuō)明圖片中所陳述的現(xiàn)象，說(shuō)明浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象很嚴(yán)重，然后說(shuō)明我們改如何做we are supposed to eat up all the food in our plates so that we can save both food and our own money.然后對(duì)青少年喜歡吃垃圾食品進(jìn)行陳述，說(shuō)明我們應(yīng)該有平衡額飲食eat a balanced diet.最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，號(hào)召大家一起現(xiàn)在就行動(dòng)起來(lái)let’s do it from now!
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