Question

考試是老師檢測(cè)學(xué)生對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)掌握程度的一種工具，但對(duì)考試成績(jī)公布與否，不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)。有學(xué)生認(rèn)為考試成績(jī)是一種隱私，老師不應(yīng)該公布。你的看法如何呢？請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇 80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶�。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Some students think that exam scores should be something private and they don't think their teachers should show them to others.

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Answer 1

One possible version:

Some students think that exam scores should be something private and they think their teachers shouldn’t show them to others.

I think it’s really a bad thing to let others know my exam scores.

If I get a low score, some students may laugh at me and it will make me sad. If I get a high score, I will be happy, but it may make others unhappy. They may think they are not smart enough and maybe they will even think my score isn’t true. Then I will have fewer friends than before and it will also make me sad..

So just keep my exam scores a secret, and everyone will be happier.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是關(guān)于考試是老師檢測(cè)學(xué)生對(duì)所學(xué)知識(shí)掌握程度的一種工具，但對(duì)考試成績(jī)公布與否，不同的人有不同的觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 開頭指出作者的觀點(diǎn)認(rèn)為分?jǐn)?shù)是自己的隱私不應(yīng)該告訴別人，并給出了自己的觀點(diǎn)。I think it’s really a bad thing to let others know my exam scores；but it may make others unhappy. They may think they are not smart enough這些短語(yǔ)和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。