Question

書面表達(dá)
下表是Wendy在春節(jié)期間某天的旅游記錄：請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所提供的信息, 幫助她寫一封郵件, 告訴她在北京的網(wǎng)友自己的旅行情況。要求：70詞左右（不包括已給的開頭）。

	Main points	Details
Place	Hong Kong	The Oriental Pearl (東方之珠), a wonderful city
Date	February 6	pleasant weather
People	My parents and I
Activities	Hong Kong Disneyland	Fantasyland and Adventureland
	Hong Kong Ocean Park	Took many photos of sea animals
Feeling	Excited	Want to see other places of interest

Dear Mary,
It was a wonderful day today! And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!________________
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Yours,
Wendy

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Mary,
It was a wonderful day today. And what a good time we had in Hong Kong!
Hong Kong is famous as the Oriental Pearl. It is a wonderful city. We had pleasant weather today. In the morning, my parents and I went to Hong Kong Disneyland. We visited Fantasyland and Adventureland. We also watched a parade of Disney characters. Later we visited Hong Kong Ocean Park. We took many photos of the sea animals there.
I was so excited. And tomorrow, I want to see more places of interest!
Yours,
Wendy

解析試題分析：本文所給材料較為詳細(xì)，要求介紹自己的一次旅行。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語的搭配。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會(huì)寫出滿意的文章來。