Question

初中三年的學校生活就要結束了，回顧三年的學校生活，你(Jack)感慨萬分。校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了“My School Life”專欄，供同學們發(fā)表感言。請你為該專欄寫一篇短文，回顧自己三年的學校生活。
短文主要包括：回顧、感謝、祝愿等。回顧應涉及到生動有趣的課堂、活潑可愛的同學、豐富多彩的活動、自己的優(yōu)點及不足等，你可以適當發(fā)揮。
要求；字數(shù)在80詞左右，第一句已經(jīng)給出，不記入總數(shù)。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名及校名。
I’m lucky to study in this beautiful school.
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Jack from Class 3

Answer 1

One possible version:
I’ m lucky to study in this beautiful school. The teachers are great. They always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. The classmates are lovely and friendly. The school life is rich and colorful. They make me happy every day.
In the past three years, I am hardworking and have made great progress. I do well in the exams. I am good at communicating and I like to make friends with others.
However, I have problems, too. I will spend less time online. I will do more sports and become stronger.
Thank you my teachers and classmates. Wish my school more beautiful, my teachers and

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一寫自己初中三年的學校生活。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，根據(jù)要求可知本句主要是過去時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。