Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。（15分）
前些年，隨著工業(yè)的發(fā)展，南京的環(huán)境一度受到污染。但近年來(lái)，隨著人們環(huán)保意識(shí)的增強(qiáng)，城市的面貌煥然一新。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面四幅圖，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)南京城市變化的短文，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右。文章的開(kāi)頭部分已給出。

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.
Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted.______________________________
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Answer 1

Not many years ago, with the development of industry, the city of Nanjing was seriously polluted. Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories made the air and river dirty. In the street, you can see litter here and theer. However, people have understood the importance of protecting our environment. They have planted many trees and the air is becoming fresh. You can see fish swimming in the clean rivers and birds flying among the trees. There are wide streets with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides. The old city has taken on a new look.

試題分析：這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文，且是寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)南京城市變化的短文，所以要用第三人稱來(lái)寫(xiě)。對(duì)于南京過(guò)去的情況，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，而對(duì)于南京的現(xiàn)狀要用現(xiàn)在的相關(guān)時(shí)態(tài)。對(duì)于圖畫(huà)類作文，必須要看懂圖畫(huà)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于圖畫(huà)類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析圖畫(huà)，理解圖畫(huà)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。