Question

書面表達。(共10分)

地球是我們賴以生存的家園，保護地球，人人有責。作為一名學生，我們應該怎么做來保護地球呢？請以How to protect the Earth為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文，可適當發(fā)揮。

提示：

1．節(jié)約用水，保護資源；

2．保護花草樹木, 保護動物；

3．騎自行車或步行上學；

4．不要到處扔垃圾，保持環(huán)境干凈；

5．工廠停止排放污水和污染空氣

參考詞匯：resources, environment, pour …into, dirty water

How to protect the Earth

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Answer 1

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world. There are many kinds of pollutions around us, such as air pollution, noise pollution, water pollution and light pollution. We can do what we can to save water, we can turn off the shower, when we wash our hair.Plants are our friends ,we should protect them.We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them.

We have only one earth. We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。如So we should not throw rubbish everywhere. The behavior of these factories will pollute the water, and sometimes it can kill the fish living in them. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.等，So等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。