Question

書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的個(gè)人信息，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以“My good friend”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要點(diǎn)提示：

要求：

(1)內(nèi)容包括所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不必逐條翻譯；

(2)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　One possible version

My good friend

　　I have a good friend．Her name is Susan．She is 14 years old．She's from America．She's a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair．She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running．She enjoys reading books and listening to music．What's more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture．So she often reads books about China．She's lovely and friendly．She gets on well with her friends．She's also helpful．She often helps me learn English．With her help, I made much progress in English．I'm lucky to have such a good friend．

　　書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1．評(píng)分時(shí)先根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言表達(dá)，初步確定其所屬檔次，然后根據(jù)該檔次的要求衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　2．本大題滿分為15分，不設(shè)小數(shù)點(diǎn)以下分值。按五個(gè)檔次給分。

　　3．文中若出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名，扣2分。