短文寫(xiě)作(12分)
Michael 的朋友 Sam 在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到以下煩惱,請(qǐng)你以Michael的名義給Tom寫(xiě)一封信來(lái)安慰他,并提出你的建議。
信息提示:
一個(gè)人不適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境,很孤單。
英語(yǔ)考試沒(méi)考好很焦慮。
睡眠不好,身體和精神狀態(tài)很差。
父母不讓上網(wǎng)。
放假想去旅行沒(méi)有錢。
要   求:1. 語(yǔ)言通順,意思連貫,書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范,所給信息必須全部用上;
2. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,詞數(shù)80詞左右。(開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
Dear Sam,
How is everything going ? _____________________________________________
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yours,
Michael

Dear Sam,
How is everything going ?In your last letter you told me you couldn’t get used to the new environment and felt very lonely.I think it’s normal at first for a person who goes into a new place. You can make some friends and talk or play with them ,if so you will feel better and less lonely.As for your English test,you needn’t be worried about it.You can think why and how you got such a grade.And later try your best to learn English ,I’m sure you can do well in it next time.Enough sleep is important to our health,so you should do more exercise and get enough sleep,then you’ll be in good health and energetic soon.You shouldn’t get online all the time.If you want to get online,you should ask for your parents’ permission,I’m sure they’ll understand you.If you want to travel but have no money,you can borrow some from your parents or friends first,or do some part-time jobs to make some money yourself.
I hope I can help you.
yours,
Michael

試題分析:這是一篇根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇敘事完整,語(yǔ)句規(guī)范的作文。這就要求仔細(xì)閱讀所給提示,然后考慮用什么樣的句子來(lái)描述內(nèi)容畫(huà)。細(xì)節(jié)方面就要注意時(shí)態(tài),語(yǔ)法以及銜接詞的運(yùn)用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,敘事清楚,詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確,能夠把要求的內(nèi)容敘述清楚,做到了首尾呼應(yīng),是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。
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