Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展，人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購物方式也在悄然地發(fā)生變化�！熬W(wǎng)購”成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體當(dāng)中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	1. 足不出戶；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁護(hù)、勞累 2. 足不出戶；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁護(hù)、勞累 3. 可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多
缺點(diǎn)	1. 只看到圖片，看不到商品本身 2. 容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)

注意：①所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面；

②文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分；

③詞數(shù)：80 詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth; 商品goods; 導(dǎo)致cause

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping on line.

【解析】

一、審題

本篇作文考查體裁為議論文。要求寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章，使用對比的方式，分析網(wǎng)購的利弊。

二、列舉寫作要點(diǎn)

1. “網(wǎng)購”成為一種時(shí)尚，越來越多的學(xué)生也正加入到網(wǎng)購群體當(dāng)中。

2. 優(yōu)點(diǎn)

①足不出戶；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁護(hù)、勞累

②足不出戶；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁護(hù)、勞累

③可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多

3. 缺點(diǎn)

①只看到圖片，看不到商品本身

②容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)

4. 總結(jié)。

三、列出重點(diǎn)短語及句型

be used to, in our life, be interested in, go outdoors, get tried, shop in line, avoid doing sth, choose from, on one hand…on the other hand, different from, all in all