Question

你叫Lucy,你的筆友Tom想要更好的了解你個(gè)人愛(ài)好。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容,介紹一下你的喜好和原因,至少補(bǔ)充一條。

	Names	Reasons
Group	Westlife	energetic, good singers, look cool ,wear cool clothes
Movie	Spider Man	wonderful, exciting
Book	Romeo and Juliet	moving ,beautiful words
…	…	…

 要求：

1. 用上提綱中的信息,并允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2. 要求用上至少兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句;

3. 內(nèi)容充實(shí),意思連貫,語(yǔ)言通順,書寫規(guī)范。詞數(shù)90左右。

Dear Tom,

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                                                                 Lucy

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to share my after-class hobbies with you. The music group that I like best is Westlife. I like it because they are good singers. They are really energetic. They wear cool clothes and they look cool. My favorite movie is Spider Man. I think it is wonderful and exciting. I like reading. And my favorite book is Romeo and Juliet, the famous book written by Shakespear. It is moving and it has beautiful words. What’s more, the subject I like best is PE, because I like sports and I can play with my friends in PE class. What about you? Can you tell me about your hobbies. Write to me soon.

                                                                      Lucy

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，利用圖表的形式，介紹了我最喜歡的樂(lè)隊(duì)、電影和書。我們要根據(jù)表格中的提示把這些用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。并且題目中有要求要至少再補(bǔ)充一條我的愛(ài)好，所以寫作時(shí)要注意。通過(guò)審題我們可以知道寫這篇短文應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；因?yàn)榻榻B的是自己的愛(ài)好，所以人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱。注意題目中要求要至少用兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，寫作時(shí)要注意這一要求。另外寫作時(shí)要適當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文意連貫，文章表達(dá)流暢、得體。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文中使用了較多的句型、短語(yǔ)和從句。例如定語(yǔ)從句的使用，The music group that I like best is、the subject I like best等。其他從句的使用如I like it because…、 I think it is…等。另外短文中還用了一些短語(yǔ)，如written by Shakespear、 What’s more等。文章內(nèi)容表達(dá)流暢，符合題目要求。層次分明，富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：圖表類作文。