Question

伴著北京奧運會倒計時的鐘聲，我們連云港創(chuàng)建文明城市的步伐也越邁越快，市民的素質(zhì)日趨提高，
但在公共場所仍有一些不文明的行為，請根據(jù)下列幾幅漫畫，用英語為某英文報紙寫一篇短文，弘揚文明行為，指出陋習(xí)，并就創(chuàng)建文明港城提出自己的建議。

注意：1．短文應(yīng)包含所有漫畫的內(nèi)容；
2．提出自己的建議，至少2條；
3．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
4．參考詞匯：文明的一civilized 吐痰一spit
Building a Civilized City With the Beijing Olympic Games coming near,  people in Lianyungang are trying hard to build the city into a civilized one._________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Building a civilized city With the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games coming near,  people in Lianyungang are trying hard to build the city into a civi­lized one. Most people do well,  they are always ready to help others,  some help the blind/the old to cross the road,  some pick up the rubbish on the way. But there are still some people,  they are not so polite,  some draw pictures or write mean­ingless words on the wall,  some spit everywhere,  some don’t wait in line,  these are all bad manners and shouldn’t be done. I think people should have some good habits,  such as waiting in line,  speaking in a low voice in public places,  and helping the weak. If everyone tries to do good and be polite,  we are sure to turn our city into a civilized one.

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫類作文，首先要看懂漫畫內(nèi)容，所以要用第三人稱來寫，且需要用一般現(xiàn)在時。需要注意：1．短文應(yīng)包含所有漫畫的內(nèi)容；2．提出自己的建議，至少2條；3．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
點評：本文屬于漫畫類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。