Question

書面表達(dá)。（本題共15分）

假如你有一位朋友叫Jenny Brown, 請你向大家介紹一下她的情況吧！

要求：1. 必須包含表格中的要點。

2. 可適當(dāng)增加其他要點。

3. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60詞。

Name	Jenny Brown
Age	13
Class	Class 5, Grade 7
Telephone number	0576-86333216
Birthday	April 15
Favorite food	hamburgers
Favorite subject	English interesting
Hobby(愛好)	basketball relaxing

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Friend Jenny

In school,my good friend is Jenny.She is an out-going girl.She has long hair and two beautiful eyes.she is Thirteen years old and she is in Class 5,Grade 7.Her telephone number is 0576-86333216 .Her birthday is on April 15th.Her favourite food is hamburgers.Her favourite subject is English.She thinks it is interesting.she wants to be an English teacher in the future.She likes playing basketball best.She thinks it is relaxing.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求小作者介紹自己朋友的情況。小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如Her favourite subject is English.She thinks it is interesting.she wants to be an English teacher in the future.She likes playing basketball best.She thinks it is relaxing.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點：考查提綱類作文。