Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)15分）

假如最近你和你的同學(xué)就“我們應(yīng)該和父母交朋友嗎？”進(jìn)行了討論�，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你以Should we make friends with our parents?為題，參照表內(nèi)所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

Your classmates ideas	Your ideas
1. they are too busy to talk with us	1. …
2. can’t understand us	2. …
3. have different lifestyles	3. …

注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的話語(yǔ)，使所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容連貫；2.所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的觀點(diǎn)和你的至少三個(gè)觀點(diǎn)；3.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞。開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.參考詞匯：concern 關(guān)心； selflessly無(wú)私地

Should we make friends with our parents?

We have had a discussion about whether we should make friends with our parents. All the students in our class gave their idea.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Should we make friends with our parents?

We have had a discussion about whether we should make friends with our parents. All the students in our class gave their idea.

Some students think it’s impossible to make friends with their parents because they are always too busy to show their concern. They say that their parents can’t understand them. Some students even think that they have different lifestyles. But I don’t think so.

I think we should make friends with our parents because they are the dearest persons to us in the world. What’s more, they provide us with food and clothes in our daily life. They care about us selflessly. And they never ask for any return. We should often talk with them and let them know our mind and thought.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者寫(xiě)出就“我們可以和父母交朋友嗎”自己的觀點(diǎn)。小作者把要求寫(xiě)的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫(xiě)作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。小作者寫(xiě)的這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如I think we should make friends with our parents because they are the dearest persons to us in the world. What’s more, they provide us with food and clothes in our daily life.有一些好的固定短語(yǔ)還有連詞。

考點(diǎn)：考查表格類(lèi)作文。