Question

假設(shè)你叫Lily, 請根據(jù)以下表格的內(nèi)容 ，寫一篇介紹你和自己姐妹Lucy的英語短文。
要求如下：
根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，尤其是介紹兩人的生活方式時要從飲食、運動的頻率等方面進(jìn)行發(fā)揮；
介紹他們個性時要恰當(dāng)運用形容詞比較級的句式；
注意人稱及時態(tài)的變化；
4. 詞數(shù)80左右。

Person	You	Lucy
lifestyle（生活方式）	healthy	unhealthy
personality（個性特點）	outgoing；  smart	hard-working ； quiet
same hobbies（共同愛好）	playing the piano;  dancing
last week’s experience（上個星期的共同經(jīng)歷）	visited the Great Wall, ate Beijing duck, bought gifts for parents ….

Answer 1

My name is Lily. I’m sixteen years old. I have a sister. Her name is Lucy. I’m outgoing and smart. Lucy is quiet.But she is more hard-working than me. We both like playing the piano and dancing. She is better than me. So she always help me with them. We like eating vegetables and fruit. But Lucy also likes eating junk food. She eats it twice a week. It’unhealthy. Last week, we went to Beijing. We visited the Great Wall. We ate Beijing duck and bought gifts for our parents. We had a great time there.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，描述自己和自己的姐妹Lucy。本題給出了具體的材料, 所以在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，結(jié)合所給材料可知，描寫生活方式、個性特點和共同愛好時，應(yīng)該主要用一般現(xiàn)在時，描寫去北京旅游時，應(yīng)該主要用一般過去時。
【亮點說明】
如果文章中使用了非常好的短語或句子會給文章增色，如both、always、like doing sth、help sb with sth。還運用了but ，so等使上下文銜接的更好。