Question

所有生物都是地球的主人，人與動(dòng)物共享同一家園。假如你是鹽城市第一中學(xué)八（1）班學(xué)生Kimi，請(qǐng)你以Protect Earth and Love Animals 為題寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，在學(xué)校舉辦的“第六屆年度英語(yǔ)節(jié)”活動(dòng)中作專(zhuān)題演講。
要求：1. 演講內(nèi)容包含所有要點(diǎn)，省略號(hào)部分要作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 條理清晰、字跡工整。詞數(shù)80詞左右。

Your idea	share the same home with other living things
Problems	1. cut down trees and forests 2. hunt animals for money 3. make more space for farms and buildings 4. many natural disasters happen every year
Ways	1. the government: make laws to protect the environment and animals 2. we students: …
Importance	If we do/don’t do …, …

Protect Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting Earth and loving animals.
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That’s all. Thank you very much!

Answer 1

Protect Earth and Love Animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting Earth and loving animals.
I think that we should share the same home with other living things. But in fact, there are many unsatisfying problems in our society. People often cut down trees and forests and hunt animals for money. Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals. As a result, many natural disasters happen every year.
So I advise that we should take some actions to protect our earth and animals. Ar first, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals. And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.
If we do this, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peacefully as they wish. But if we don’t, everything will beyond our imagination. So let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us human and animals as well.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇演講稿，我們要用熱情洋溢的語(yǔ)言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作中要包含你個(gè)人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)、現(xiàn)在存在的問(wèn)題、解決的辦法以及其重要性等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要是第一人稱(chēng)，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文詳細(xì)、全面地描述了演講稿的內(nèi)容，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。語(yǔ)言鏗鏘有力、有說(shuō)服力；其中使用了一些復(fù)雜句式和短語(yǔ)，包含狀語(yǔ)從句的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals，And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。