Question

大千世界，無奇不有。相信同學們也遇到過這類謊言、騙局或謠言。假設(shè)你叫李明，是紅星（Hongxing）中學九（1）班的學生，請你寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹；

描述一次類似的經(jīng)歷，并說說你當時的感受；

以后再經(jīng)歷這樣的事，作為學生，我們該怎么做？請?zhí)岢鰞蓚�建議或做法。

作文要求：

不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校真實的名稱和學生的真實姓名；

語句連貫，次數(shù)在80個左右。作文的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first._____________________________________________________

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That’s all. Thank you.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

面對謊言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Yesterday afternoon, the student on duty said he had to see the doctor. I offered to do the cleaning for him. Later I found him playing basketball on the playground. I was quite unhappy. He didn’t tell the lie. I would do the duty for him if he asked.

As students, we should always tell the truth even if others might not agree with us. When others tell lies, we’d better make them understand that honesty is the best policy.

That’s all. Thank you. (95 words)

面對騙局

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. Last year, I received a chain letter saying that only kind people could receive the letter. If I sent if to as many people as possible, I would get good luck. But if I didn’t , I would die the next day. I was so scared that I sent it to some of my friends.

As students, we shouldn’t forward such chain letters. If we don’t know how to deal with them, we’d better ask our teachers or parents for help.

That’s all. Thank you.(95 words)

面對謠言

Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first.My name is Li Ming, a student from Class One, Grade Nine, Hongxing Middle School. I heard a rumor of the same kind this year. It is said that a Chinese medicine called Banlangen could kill the flu of H7N9 or some diseases like that. So it was sold out in our city very soon. I thought it was so silly and I didn’t believe it at all. I would rather ask the doctor for advice than buy the medicine.

As students, we should keep calm when we face such rumors. Besides, we shouldn’t believe or spread them.

That’s all. Thank you.(98 words)

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文,寫一篇發(fā)言稿介紹自己的一次經(jīng)歷,并針對自己的經(jīng)歷提出兩點建議。結(jié)合本文題材可知,寫作中首先要對自己的情況簡要介紹,并注意用語的禮貌性,如開頭對聽眾進行問候,結(jié)尾表達謝意等.結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文時態(tài)涉及過去,現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài),注意時態(tài)和時間狀語的一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞,注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。