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請以How should we keep healthy?為題寫一篇60-70詞的短文。

要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名。

2.字跡工整。

How should we keep healthy?

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Answer 1

One possible version：

How should we keep healthy?

As we know, it is important for us to keep healthy. But how should we keep healthy? I think there are some ways to keep healthy. First, we should have food eating habits, and we should eat more vegetables and fruit. Because it is good for our health. Second, we should do exercise, such as running, walking, swimming and so on. And we must keep sleep eight or nine hours every day. Third, we had better eat less junk food. If we have a good lifestyle, we can keep healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹如何保持健康。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I think……; We should…….; We must……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了保持健康的重要性，接下來介紹保持健康的方法，最后指出如果有好的生活習(xí)慣，就會保持健康。此處用了句型It is important for us to do sth，短語keep healthy, be good for, do exercise等也讓文章增色不少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。