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書面表達(dá)（本題有1小題；共計(jì)20分）

最近全班就“有效的英語學(xué)習(xí)方式”展開討論。其中Mike的觀點(diǎn)令你印象深刻。請根據(jù)以下表格要點(diǎn)寫一篇報道，介紹他的觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱挠⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)。短文開頭已經(jīng)給出。

 

Ways of Learning English
	Successful	OK / Not bad	Unsuccessful
Mike	watching English movies	reading English magazines	studying grammar
joining the English club	listening to English songs	reading textbooks
I	…	…	…

注意：1）依據(jù)你的英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，將表格補(bǔ)充完整；

2）報道必須包括表中所有的相應(yīng)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3）文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；

4）詞數(shù)：80-100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Ways of Learning English

Recently, students in our class have had a discussion about different ways of learning English. …

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Recently, students in our class have had a discussion about different ways of learning English. Everyone was very interested in this topic and had all kinds of thoughts. Mike shared something with us. Mike said the best way to learn English was watching English movies and joining the English club. He also said reading English magazines and listening to English songs could help learn English well. But he hated studying grammar. He thought it was useless. He said studying grammar was a bad way to learn English and reading textbooks was not helpful at all. But I think there are many ways to learn English. The most important is that your way is just right for you. My favorite is to read English stories and chat with foreign friends online. It helps me a lot. What’s your opinion?

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們介紹一下邁克學(xué)習(xí)英語的觀點(diǎn)。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫作提綱，主要包括四部分的內(nèi)容。一是學(xué)習(xí)成功的方法，如看英文電影，加入英語俱樂部；二是還可以的學(xué)習(xí)英語的方法如閱讀英文雜志和聽英語歌曲；三是學(xué)習(xí)英語不成功的方法，如研究語法和看課本。四是談下我們自己的觀點(diǎn)。提綱雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實(shí)，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費(fèi)我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者根據(jù)表格中所列要點(diǎn)，客觀講述了邁克的觀點(diǎn)，同時也清晰表達(dá)了自己的看法，層次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯。如Everyone was very interested in this topic and had all kinds of thoughts. Mike shared something with us.等。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如The most important is that your way is just right for you. What do you think of it?等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。