Question

假如你是李華，你的朋友Sam想在暑假來中國的哈爾濱旅游，他給你發(fā)了一封郵件，想向你了解一下哈爾濱的有關(guān)情況。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給Sam回一封郵件。
要求：
適當(dāng)使用would like/love to 和hope to 結(jié)構(gòu)。
字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

位置	中國東北
天氣	冬天很冷，夏天不熱
景點(diǎn)	太陽島（Sun Island）避暑圣地；松花江（the Songhua River）游泳、劃船；龍塔（the Dragon Tower）鳥瞰全市；中央大街（Zhongyang Walking Street）購物街；神索菲亞大教堂（the St.Sophia Church）寧靜的地方

Dear Sam,
Thanks for your e-mail.Im glad to hear that youre coming to Harbin,China.Now let me tell you something about it.____________
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Welcome to Harbin!                             
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Thanks for your e-mail .I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Harbin, China,Now let me tell you something about it.Harbin is in northeast of China.It's very cold in winter.But it isn't very hot in summer.
With this suitable climate（氣候）, there're som sights e where you must visit.For example,the Sun Island is famous for its summer resort(避暑勝地).And the Songhua river is the place that is for us to swim andboat.Personlly speaking（個(gè)人而言）, the Dragon Tower is a good place for you to look around the whole city.
Central Avenue（中央街） is the first choice for you to shop.If you want to go to some quiet places,I suggest that you should go to the church that is quiet and comfortable（舒適）.
Welcome to Harbin!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹哈爾濱的位置，天氣及景點(diǎn)。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，可以按照順序依次介紹哈爾濱的地理位置，天氣情況，旅游景點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。復(fù)合句，固定句式的使用會給文章增色不少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了合適的連詞，定語從句和短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)，.如連詞: But ,With this suitable climate（氣候），Personlly speaking（個(gè)人而言），等；定語從句：you should go to the church that is quiet and comfortable（舒適）. the Songhua river is the place that is for us to swim and boat.固定句式和詞組：the first choice for you to shop, is famous for等。這使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。