Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）
每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，為了讓這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)更加深入人心，某英文雜志的“運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康“欄目正在以“l(fā)et’s Do Exercise Together“為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的要點(diǎn)寫一篇文章，向該欄目投稿。

運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性	運(yùn)動(dòng)的時(shí)間與方式
保持健康 培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格 。。。。。。	上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車 體育課作各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球。。。。。。） 周末與朋友去爬山、游泳。。。。。。

參考詞匯：keep healthy , train a person’s character, on foot, PE classes, climb mountains
要求：1、短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：]
2、詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、文章中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。
Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise.                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        
                                                                        

Answer 1

Let’s Do Exercise Together
It’s very important for us to do exercise. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person’s character. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better.
We can do exercise whenever we want. It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike. In PE classes, we can do all kinds of exercise, such as running, jumping, playing basketball and so on. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends. Also, we can go hiking during the vacations.
Let’s do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意主謂一致及時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的一致問(wèn)題。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少. 如: It’s …… for ……to do……對(duì)于某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事怎么樣；not only……but also不但……而且；what’s more而且；go swimming去游泳等句式。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.