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第五部分：書面表達。（15分）請將文章用0.5毫米黑色簽字 筆寫在答題卡相應的位置上。
俗話說：“國有國法，家有家規(guī)。”為了使子女身心健康、順利成長，使家庭成員之間的關系更融洽、更和諧，每個家庭都會有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時回家，不準打電子游戲等。請你結合家庭的實際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以My Family Rules為題，寫一篇作文。
提示：家里有哪些規(guī)矩；對家規(guī)的感受；對父母的建議。
要求：必須包括提示內容，可以適當發(fā)揮；80個詞左右；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名和人名。
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Answer 1

There are many rules in my family. And most of them are about me. For example, on weekdays I have to get up early in the morning; I can't watch TV or go out on school nights; I have to go home quickly after school；I can’t play computer games, and so on.
There are too many! I feel my parents are too strict with me. And sometimes it's unfair. Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?
So, my dear parents, please understand me! I know both of you want me to study hard, but I'm only a child. I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too. Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。寫作前一定要看清題目，根據(jù)要求作文一定要包含提示內容，所以在寫作時可以按照提示組織文章內容。文章可用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時來描寫。注意主謂一致和表達的準確性�？蛇m當使用連詞使文章邏輯跟緊密。
【亮點說明】
這篇作文緊扣要求，要點周全，內容充實。文中使用了很多很有用的表達方式和句型，例如：for example例如；have to 不得不；grow up 成長；and so on 等等；Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?為什么對我有那么多的規(guī)定，而對他們則沒說明規(guī)定。Many多，和few幾乎沒有，形成了對比。I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too.盡管我也好努力學習，但我也需要多點快樂時間來健康成長。Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?你們能多給我點時間讓我做自己喜歡的事情嗎？that后面引導定語從句修飾things。