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第五部分：書(shū)面表達(dá)。（15分）請(qǐng)將文章用0.5毫米黑色簽字 筆寫(xiě)在答題卡相應(yīng)的位置上。
俗話說(shuō)：“國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)�！睘榱耸棺优�身心健康、順利成長(zhǎng)，使家庭成員之間的關(guān)系更融洽、更和諧，每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時(shí)回家，不準(zhǔn)打電子游戲等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合家庭的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以My Family Rules為題，寫(xiě)一篇作文。
提示：家里有哪些規(guī)矩；對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；對(duì)父母的建議。
要求：必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；80個(gè)詞左右；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名和人名。
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Answer 1

There are many rules in my family. And most of them are about me. For example, on weekdays I have to get up early in the morning; I can't watch TV or go out on school nights; I have to go home quickly after school；I can’t play computer games, and so on.
There are too many! I feel my parents are too strict with me. And sometimes it's unfair. Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?
So, my dear parents, please understand me! I know both of you want me to study hard, but I'm only a child. I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too. Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。寫(xiě)作前一定要看清題目，根據(jù)要求作文一定要包含提示內(nèi)容，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照提示組織文章內(nèi)容。文章可用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)描寫(xiě)。注意主謂一致和表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。可適當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯跟緊密。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇作文緊扣要求，要點(diǎn)周全，內(nèi)容充實(shí)。文中使用了很多很有用的表達(dá)方式和句型，例如：for example例如；have to 不得不；grow up 成長(zhǎng)；and so on 等等；Why are there so many rules for me but so few for my parents?為什么對(duì)我有那么多的規(guī)定，而對(duì)他們則沒(méi)說(shuō)明規(guī)定。Many多，和few幾乎沒(méi)有，形成了對(duì)比。I need more happy time to grow up healthily although I'll work hard, too.盡管我也好努力學(xué)習(xí)，但我也需要多點(diǎn)快樂(lè)時(shí)間來(lái)健康成長(zhǎng)。Would you please give me more time to do the things that I like to do?你們能多給我點(diǎn)時(shí)間讓我做自己喜歡的事情嗎？that后面引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句修飾things。