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上星期，學(xué)校就學(xué)生的作業(yè)量問(wèn)題要求各班召開(kāi)家長(zhǎng)會(huì)進(jìn)行討論。以下是你班家長(zhǎng)的觀點(diǎn)：多數(shù)家長(zhǎng)認(rèn)為作業(yè)多有好處，而部分家長(zhǎng)則認(rèn)為作業(yè)過(guò)多對(duì)孩子的成長(zhǎng)不利。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面方框中的提示，用英語(yǔ)作一簡(jiǎn)要介紹并表明你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

注意：(1)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，要求意思連貫，語(yǔ)句通順；

(2)詞數(shù)80左右；短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Last week our class had a parents' meeting．At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not．Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful．

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One possible version： 　　Last week our class had a parents' meeting．At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not．Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful．They thought by doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned．It would also help to develop the students' minds and stop them playing computer games． 　　But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless．Because doing much homework took a lot of time and thus students could not have a good rest．What's more, they could not do the things they liked． 　　In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful．(81 words) 　　書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 　　一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)： 　　1．Doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned． 　　2．It would also help to develop the students' minds and stop them playing computer games． 　　3．But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless． 　　4．Because doing much homework took a lot of time． 　　5．Students could not have a good rest． 　　6．They could not do the things they liked． 　　7．In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful． 　　二、本大題總分為15分，按五個(gè)檔次給分 　　第一檔(14－15分)：能寫明全部要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚。 　　第二檔(11－13分)：能寫明大部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文比較連貫，表達(dá)比較清楚。 　　第三檔(8－10分)：能寫明部分要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言有較多錯(cuò)誤，行文不太連貫，但尚能表達(dá)意思。 　　第四檔(5－7分)：能寫明少部分或個(gè)別要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，只有個(gè)別句子可讀、可看懂。 　　第五檔(0－4分)：基本上沒(méi)有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，只有一些詞匯堆積，不知所云。