Question

每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想，或是成為偉大的科學(xué)家，或是成為眾人矚目的明星，對(duì)于不同的人夢(mèng)想是不一樣的，下面以My dream 為題，寫寫自己的夢(mèng)想是什么？
My Dream
Everyone has his dream .My dream is
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Answer 1

Dear teachers and friends
I’m happy to be here to share my dream with you.
Life is of great value to all of us. We can only live once. It’s necessary for our lives to have a dream.
My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. My favorite writer is Jane Austen, who writes Pride and Prejudice. Her books are so perfect that I read them again and again and never get tired. How I want to be a great writer like Jane Austen! I hope to make my life more meaningful in this way.
In order to make my dream come true, I ought to spend my limited life carefully. It’s important to read a large number of great books and practice writing from time to time. I believe I can make my dream come true one day. I’m looking forward to the coming of that day!
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: share my dream with you和你們分享我的夢(mèng)想, It’s necessary for our lives to have a dream 有夢(mèng)想對(duì)于我們的人生很重要，In order to make my dream come true,為了實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.