Question

假設(shè)TV Guide外文版將刊登文章介紹湖南電視臺(tái)熱播的電視節(jié)目“爸爸去哪兒”(Dad, Where Are We Going?)，上周五你看過一期。請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫一篇80詞左右的英文觀后感。內(nèi)容提示如下：

1. 節(jié)目由5個(gè)明星爸爸和他們的孩子主演，深受各年齡段的人喜愛；

2. 目的是鼓勵(lì)親子雙方重視交流，對(duì)于人們有良好的影響；

3. 爸爸們以前沒有時(shí)間陪孩子，現(xiàn)在已學(xué)會(huì)如何悉心照顧孩子；

4. 觀后感想。

注意：

1. 觀后感須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第4要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3. 觀后感的開頭已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

The program Dad, Where Are We Going? is one of this year’s hottest TV programs. I saw it last Friday.

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

The program Dad, Where Are We Going? is one of this year’s hottest TV programs. I saw it last Friday. Five star fathers and their children play the lead roles in the program. It is popular among people of all ages. The aim of the program is to encourage parents and children to pay attention to the communication. It has a good effect on people. Before fathers had no time for children. Now they have learned how to take good care of their children. I think this TV program is very meaningful. We should be brave to deal with problems.

【解析】

 試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文要求針對(duì)電視節(jié)目并按照提示的內(nèi)容完成這篇觀后感，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含電視節(jié)目的內(nèi)容、形式，節(jié)目的目的等幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行陳述，重點(diǎn)要發(fā)揮合理的想象表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一、三人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

這篇觀后感簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地介紹了電視節(jié)目的內(nèi)容、形式，節(jié)目的目的等，包括了所給的全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)語句通順、意思連貫；其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含形容詞最高級(jí)的準(zhǔn)確使用，.如play the lead roles in the program，people of all ages，pay attention to，It has a good effect on people，how to take good care of their children學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。