Question

姓名	Li Ming
年齡	13歲
居住地	江蘇南京
長相	短發(fā)，個子很高，戴眼鏡
品格	學習勤奮，擅長英語和數(shù)學
所在學校班級	陽光中學，七年級一班
愛好	游泳，玩電腦游戲，經(jīng)常在周末和同學一起踢足球，梅西（Messi）是他最喜歡的運動員和偶像
理想	當一名足球運動員

注意 1. 請正確地使用人稱；

2. 短文必須包含所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

3. 要求語言通順，段落清楚，句子連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

WangMing is my friend . He is thirteen years old. He lives in Suzhou,Jiangsu. He is a student of Sunshine Secondary School。Now,he is in Class One,Grade Seven.

He is a tall boy with short hair. He wears glasses. He is polite and helpful. He is willing to help others.

He works very hard He is good at English and maths.

He likes swimming and playing computer games. He often plays football with his classmates at the weekend. Messi is his favourite football player. Messi is his hreo!He wants to be a football player when he grows up .

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹我的朋友王明。主要介紹他的年齡，居住地，長相，品格，愛好，理想等。表所給的內(nèi)容十分的詳細。在寫作中注意主謂一致，句子條理通順就可以了。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，注意到了第三人稱單數(shù)的應用。同時能使用 一些短語，如a tall boy with short hair.，is willing to，is good at等。

考點：表格作文。