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現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差。環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重…如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境？請(qǐng)以“How to protect/save our environment/world?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。

提示：存在問(wèn)題：

1．水污染和大氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重

2．森林被破壞和砍伐

3．白色垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)

要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境？至少3－4個(gè)方面，80詞左右。

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　　答案：One possible version．

How to protect/save our environment/world？

　　The environmental pollution is more and more serious today．We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution．And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear．There is more and more dirty smoke in the air．People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution．Many people died of diseases．In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect our world．

　　Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere．And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution．Use things for as long as possible．Don’t use plastic bags．Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them．We hope our world is more and more beautiful．

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　1、內(nèi)容充實(shí)，包含全部要點(diǎn)。表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤。(13－15分)

　　2、要點(diǎn)全部寫(xiě)出，較通順完整，有少量語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。(10－12分)

　　3、基本要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)出，有較多語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，但尚能達(dá)意。(7－9分)

　　4、要點(diǎn)不全，篇幅不足，表達(dá)不清楚，錯(cuò)誤較多。(4－6分)

　　5、能寫(xiě)出一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)不清楚，只拼湊詞句。(0－3分)