Question

請你給班主任寫一封推薦信，推薦 Li Lei 當班長。信中要對Li Lei進行全面介紹。

詞數(shù)80-100。

1.16歲，九年級，外貌。

2.星座----，以及所代表的性格特征。

3.有許多個人特質(zhì)：自信、勤奮、好學，成績好。

4.樂于助人，常為我們講解難題。

5.為人善良，不自私，能注意每個細節(jié)。

6.聰明、富于創(chuàng)意和想象力。

18th August

Dear Mr. Lu

We are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Lu

W e are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor. He is a 16-year-old good-looking boy .He is in Grade 9.His star sign is Leo, so he is so confident and hardworking that he often gets good marks in all the subjects .He is polite and helpful to others. When his classmates have any problems, they often ask him for help. He is kind, generous, so he has made many good friends. He is very clever, creative and imaginative. He often takes an active part in different activities. We all like him.

I think that Li Lei has all the qualities to be a good monitor .I hope you can agree with me.

Yours Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是一封推薦信，首先應(yīng)該注意書信的格式，然后注意推薦的是別人，所以人稱應(yīng)該用第三人稱；本文的時態(tài)也應(yīng)該盡可能用一般現(xiàn)在時；書寫時，應(yīng)該注意表達的邏輯性，盡量將提示內(nèi)容表達的直觀清晰，符合英語的表達習慣。本文中會用到這些單詞或短語confident、hardworking、careful、kind、clever、creative、imaginative、help sb. to do等。

【亮點說明】這封信注意到了格式，時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，還注意了連詞的運用。句子的順暢，符合英語的表達習慣。

考點：提綱類作文