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8．中秋節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一．假設(shè)你的美國(guó)筆友Mike想了解一下中秋節(jié)的情況，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息寫一篇70詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，向他簡(jiǎn)單介紹中秋節(jié)．開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

時(shí)間	每年陰歷八月十五日．
方式	在那一天，人們通�；丶遗c家人共聚晚餐．人們還會(huì)吃月餅，有各種各樣的月餅，比如豆餡、蛋黃餡、果仁餡或肉餡等．晚飯過(guò)后，許多人喜歡賞月．
象征	人們認(rèn)為月亮是團(tuán)圓、運(yùn)氣、財(cái)富的象征，在那天人們互相表達(dá)美好的祝福．

提示詞：August 15^th of the Lunar calendar （陰歷八月十五）； mooncake（月餅）；round（圓的）；bean paste（豆餡）；egg-yolk（蛋黃）；nut（果仁）；appreciate the moon（賞月）；express（表達(dá)）；a symbol of reunion（團(tuán)圓的象征）；fortune（財(cái)富）
It is on August 15^th of the Lunar calendar every year．On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．They also eat mooncakes．There are all kinds of mooncakes，some have bean paste in them，and some have egg-yolk，nuts，meat or other things inside．After dinner，many people like to appreciate the moon．
People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，so they express best wishes to each other on that day．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹中秋節(jié)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1時(shí)間：每年陰歷八月十五日．
2方式：在那一天，人們通�；丶遗c家人共聚晚餐．人們還會(huì)吃月餅，有各種各樣的月餅，比如豆餡、蛋黃餡、果仁餡或肉餡等．晚飯過(guò)后，許多人喜歡賞月
3象征：人們認(rèn)為月亮是團(tuán)圓、運(yùn)氣、財(cái)富的象征，在那天人們互相表達(dá)美好的祝福．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
go back  回到…
a symble of …標(biāo)志
each other 彼此
all kinds of  多樣的
【高分句型】
1．The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China
one of+the+最高級(jí)+名詞復(fù)數(shù)  最怎么樣的某某之一，最高級(jí)的用法
2．On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．
動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)
3．People believe①that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，②so they express best wishes to each other on that day．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為believe的賓語(yǔ)
②so表示所以．連詞，表示因果關(guān)系，引出下文．

解答 The Mid-autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China．【高分句型】It is on August 15^th of the Lunar calendar every year．（每年陰歷八月十五日．）On that day，people usually go back home to enjoy a large meal with their family．【高分句型】They also eat mooncakes．There are all kinds of mooncakes，some have bean paste in them，and some have egg-yolk，nuts，meat or other things inside．After dinner，many people like to appreciate the moon．（方式在那一天，人們通常回家與家人共聚晚餐．人們還會(huì)吃月餅，有各種各樣的月餅，比如豆餡、蛋黃餡、果仁餡或肉餡等．晚飯過(guò)后，許多人喜歡賞月）
   People believe that the moon is a symbol of reunion，luck and fortune，so they express best wishes to each other on that day．（人們認(rèn)為月亮是團(tuán)圓、運(yùn)氣、財(cái)富的象征，在那天人們互相表達(dá)美好的祝福）【高分句型】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，內(nèi)容是向外國(guó)朋友介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-中秋節(jié)，寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)齊全，不能漏寫，并且要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．