Question

書(shū)面表達(dá) (共20分)

假設(shè)你是李磊，特麗莎是你的筆友。她想了解一下中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容提示，給她回信，介紹一下中國(guó)人是如何慶祝春節(jié)的。80詞左右(信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

內(nèi)容提示：

①春節(jié)the Spring Festival：one of the most important traditional festivals; about 2000 years old

②慶祝時(shí)間：be celebrated in January or February

③國(guó)家法定節(jié)假日：have seven days off

④慶祝方式：a traditional dinner, make dumplings, watch TV programmes, wear new clothes, visit friends, get Hongbao, play fireworks（放鞭炮）

Hi Teresa,

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Hey, why don’t you come to China and spend the festival with us this year? It will be great fun.

Yours,

Li Lei

 

Answer 1

Hi Teresa,

I’m glad to hear from you. I know you want to learn about Chinese traditional festivals in your last letter. Now I’d like to introduce one of the most important festivals—Spring Festival to you.

The Spring Festival is about 2,000 years old. It is usually celebrated in January or February. During the Spring Festival, we can have seven days off to prepare for it and celebrate it. We have many customs to celebrate it. On the eve of the Spring Festival, we often have a big dinner with our family, eat dumplings, set off fireworks and watch Spring Gala on TV. Children can get lucky money from their grandparents and parents. On Spring Festival, we often wear new clothes and visit friends. We often wish each other good luck in the coming new year.

Hey, why don’t you come to China and spend the festival with us this year? It will be great fun.

Yours,

Li Lei

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以李磊的身份，給Teresa寫(xiě)一封信，給她講講關(guān)于中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日-春節(jié)的事情。題目中給我們列出了一些主要的內(nèi)容，如春節(jié)的簡(jiǎn)單介紹、慶祝的時(shí)間、方式等。我們需要將這些信息加以充實(shí)，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)。春節(jié)是我們比較熟悉的一個(gè)節(jié)日，關(guān)于春節(jié)的風(fēng)俗我們也是比較了解，例如除夕，我們要吃團(tuán)圓飯，看春晚；春節(jié)那天我們要穿新衣服，要去拜年。小朋友們會(huì)得到壓歲錢(qián)，放鞭炮等。要說(shuō)春節(jié)的特色美食，那就是餃子了。因此在這篇文章中，我們會(huì)有話可說(shuō)。但是我們需要注意，要把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達(dá)出來(lái)，并且要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)主要使用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們要注意長(zhǎng)句和短句的搭配使用，并盡量使用好的句型和短語(yǔ)，使文章整體表達(dá)流暢，有節(jié)奏感。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。作者在信中給我們?cè)敿?xì)的介紹了春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗。首先，作者先點(diǎn)明，春節(jié)是中國(guó)最重要的節(jié)日之一，Now I’d like to introduce one of the most important festivals—Spring Festival to you.。在第二段中，作者詳細(xì)的介紹了春節(jié)的習(xí)俗，包括吃團(tuán)圓飯、看春晚、要壓歲錢(qián)、拜年、穿新衣等。這一部分是文章的主體，使用了較多的句型和短語(yǔ)，例如It is usually celebrated in January or February. During the Spring Festival、On the eve of the Spring Festival, we often have a big dinner with our family, eat dumplings, set off fireworks and watch Spring Gala on TV、On Spring Festival, we often wear new clothes and visit friends等。最后向Teresa發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，讓她來(lái)一起過(guò)春節(jié)。整篇短文內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫，使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、復(fù)合句、固定的短語(yǔ)等，使文章表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文。