Question

李明是個(gè)很聰明的學(xué)生，住在北京，但他有一些不好的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，用英文寫一篇短文，并針對(duì)他存在的一些問題提出合理的建議。

學(xué)習(xí)情況	北京陽光中學(xué)，七年級(jí)一班 ，擅長(zhǎng)地理和歷史
外    貌	個(gè)子不高，大眼睛，短發(fā)，戴眼鏡，總是穿運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋，因?yàn)檩p便舒適
	喜     歡	唱歌、玩電腦游戲，兩餐間喜歡吃零食
不 喜 歡	游泳、跑步，吃蔬菜
其它情況	常去他家前面的購物中心，離他家不遠(yuǎn)，是一個(gè)見朋友的好地方
建    議	至少兩條

具體要求： 

1. 不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 

2. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。 

3. 內(nèi)容必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

 Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He is at Beijing Sunshine Middle School.______ 

 

 

He likes singing and ______________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

He often goes to

 

I think _________________________________________________________________________

 

Answer 1

 Li Ming is a clever student. He lives in Beijing. He studies in Beijing Sunshine Middle School.

He is in Class 1, Grade 7. He is good at Geography and History. He isn’t tall. He has big eyes and short hair. He wears glasses. He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable.

He likes singing and playing computer games. He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables. He also dislikes swimming and running.

He often goes to the shopping mall in front of his home. It’s not far away from / near his home. It’s a good place to meet friends.

I think he must change his lifestyle. He should eat more vegetables because they are good for his health. He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)一些常見短語：is good at 擅長(zhǎng)做某事likes singing 喜歡做某事in front of 在。。前面far away from 與。。很遠(yuǎn)are good for對(duì)。。有好處。He always wears trainers because they are light and comfortable這個(gè)句子中becaue連接兩個(gè)因果關(guān)系的句子。He likes having snacks between meals, but he doesn’t like eating vegetables.這個(gè)句子中but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。He also needs to do some exercise like playing basketball and running in his free time.這個(gè)句子中need是個(gè)實(shí)義動(dòng)詞需要，need to do 需要做某事，like是介詞表示 象。。，and連接playing,running并列，所以時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文。