Question

你學(xué)校最近開(kāi)展“美好校園”的系列活動(dòng)，你參加了“美好校園，從我做起”的演講，請(qǐng)以 “Start out small”為題, 寫(xiě)一篇演講辭，內(nèi)容必須包括：
1. 描述圖中校園內(nèi)的不良行為；
2. 自由發(fā)揮，描述其他一至兩點(diǎn)校園內(nèi)的不良行為;
2. 發(fā)表你的校園文明倡議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右（文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；
2. 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school…

Answer 1

Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school. Firstly, in order to save water, we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things. But some of us often forget it. Secondly, we should protect the trees and grass which make our school beautiful. For example, we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass. Besides, don’t liter around. It’s a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy. Let’s start out small. Only in this way can we make our school beautiful. So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment.

試題分析：這是一篇圖片作文。根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容和要求，以“美好校園，從我做起”為主題描述一些校園內(nèi)不文明現(xiàn)象，圖片已經(jīng)給出我們?nèi)�點(diǎn)提示，要求我們自己適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，再寫(xiě)出一條。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如：in order to“為了”；forget to do sth“忘記做某事”；It’s a good habit to do put the rubbish into the rubbish .“將垃圾扔進(jìn)垃圾箱是好習(xí)慣。”以及倒裝句的使用。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。