Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)(本大題共10分)

假設(shè)你叫劉濤，給美國(guó)的筆友Jack寫(xiě)信，向他介紹你在初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活:

要點(diǎn)：1. 目前你忙于學(xué)習(xí)，幾乎在學(xué)習(xí)上沒(méi)有取得大的進(jìn)步。

2. 雖然你時(shí)常感到壓力，但你相信充足的睡眠會(huì)有幫助，所以總是仔細(xì)計(jì)劃你的每一天。

3. 父母在學(xué)習(xí)上對(duì)你很?chē)?yán)格，他們不允許花時(shí)間做別的事情，你對(duì)此感到很糟。

4. 你認(rèn)為……

注意：1. 第四要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。

2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies__________________________________________

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Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Liu Tao

 

Answer 1

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies that I hardly has made great progress in my study. Although I feel stressed at times. I believe enough sleep can be helpful so I always plan my day carefully. My parents are very strict with me in my studies. They don’t allow me to do anything else. I feel bad about that .I think it’s necessary to have some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.

Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Liu Tao

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們介紹我的初三的學(xué)習(xí)生活。在題目中給了我們這篇短文的寫(xiě)作提綱，主要包括四部分的內(nèi)容。一是目前我忙于學(xué)習(xí)，幾乎在學(xué)習(xí)上沒(méi)有取得大的進(jìn)步。二是雖然我時(shí)常感到壓力，但我相信充足的睡眠會(huì)有幫助，所以總是仔細(xì)計(jì)劃我的每一天。三是父母在學(xué)習(xí)上對(duì)我很?chē)?yán)格，他們不允許花時(shí)間做別的事情，我對(duì)此感到很糟。四是我自己的觀點(diǎn)想法。要求第四要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2-3句話作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: I’m so busy with studies that I hardly has made great progress in my study. Although I feel stressed at times. 短文中需要作者自己補(bǔ)充的內(nèi)容完成得也不錯(cuò)。如I think it’s necessary to have some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.內(nèi)容比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文。