Question

假定你叫張華，最近從報(bào)紙上得知美國(guó)某公司將在你的家鄉(xiāng)建一座工廠，請(qǐng)給該公司寫封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：
●表示歡迎：有利于家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展等；
●感到擔(dān)憂：造成環(huán)境污染等；
●希望了解有關(guān)環(huán)保措施及更多信息。
注意：1．詞數(shù)80—100；
2．請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮以使行文連貫；
3．郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection.
Would you please offer us more information about it?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Zhang Hua

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封信。動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真要點(diǎn)，然后根據(jù)要點(diǎn)組織材料。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。