Question

“An umbrella in the rain, a helpful hand when you’re lost, all are the friendship. Wherever you are with friends, you won’t be lonely or helpless.”請你根據(jù)對這兩句話的理解及自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀銓ε笥押陀颜x的看法 。
提示：
擁有朋友的重要性。
舉例說明你和你朋友之間發(fā)生的故事。
你對朋友和友誼的理解。
注意：
1.應(yīng)覆蓋所有的要點；可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；
詞數(shù)不少于80。
參考詞匯：encourage; cherish;  important; friendship
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Answer 1

  As the saying goes, “A true friend is the best possession.” And I do have such friends.
In the dubbing contest last semester, our group faced a big problem. The computer couldn’t play our video, but one of my friends had the film we needed. So she went back home at once to bring it here. As a result, we got second prize.
I think a friend is someone who cares more for you than for himself. A friend is someone how gives you a hand when you are feeling down. So take good care of your friendships and cherish your best possession.

這是一篇給材料作文。材料中只給出了寫作要點,需要自己圍繞要點組織材料,確定具體寫作內(nèi)容。結(jié)合要點可知本文時態(tài)主要是一般過去時態(tài)及現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣,盡量利用所給單詞。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。