Question

書面表達(dá)（10分）

下面是Tina 同學(xué)給Jane 的回信，信中提到學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的幾條建議，根據(jù)Tina提的建議，用英語(yǔ)完成下面建議。寫一篇80詞左右的文章。文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

建議：1）上課要認(rèn)真聽講；

2）每天大聲讀新單詞；

3）課堂盡可能多講英語(yǔ)；

4）把錯(cuò)誤寫在筆記本里；

5）讀讀英語(yǔ)故事，看看英語(yǔ)電影；

6）但不必逐詞理解；

7）與英國(guó)人交筆友，常寫信。

Dear Jane，

I am very glad to hear from you .How to learn English well ? I will give you some advice . I think it is very important to learn English well. You

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Yours

Tina

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Jane，

I am very glad to hear from you. How to learn English well? I will give you some advice. I think it is very important to learn English well. You should listen to the teacher carefully in class. It is a good idea to read the new words aloud every day. Try to speak English as much as possible in class, and write down the mistakes in the notebooks. You had better read English stories and watch some English films. You don’t need to understand every word. Why not find some English pen friends? You can often write to them. It’s helpful to learn English.

Yours

Tina

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及將來時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: be glad to很高興做某事；hear from聽說；it is adj to do sth做某事怎么樣；as much as possible盡可能地；had better do sth最好做某事；why not do sth為什么不做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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