Question

書面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)15分）

假設(shè)你有位朋友叫Daniel，下面表格中列出了他的一些情況，請(qǐng)據(jù)此寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，

字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右,文章的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

特點(diǎn)	我們班最高的男生；總是面帶笑容，看上去很高興；很幽默，經(jīng)常講笑話讓我們開(kāi)懷大笑。
品行	愿意和朋友分享東西；對(duì)人友善；時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備幫助別人，比如總是幫同學(xué)解決難題。
愛(ài)好	喜歡下棋和打棒球。每天花在愛(ài)好上的時(shí)間一小時(shí)。他比我用在愛(ài)好上的時(shí)間多。
未來(lái)計(jì)劃	長(zhǎng)大想當(dāng)一名社會(huì)工作者，幫助更多的人。

My friend Daniel

I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My friend Daniel

I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.

He is the tallest boy in our class. There is always a smile on his face. He is very helpful and humorous. He often tells jokes to make us laugh happily. He is such a helpful friend that he is always ready to help others. For example，he is always be glad to help someone with their difficulties. In his free time，he likes play chess and baseball. He spends about one hour on his hobbies every day. This is more than me. His dream is to be a social worker，because he wants to help more people.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如: be ready to愿意做某事；for example例如；be glad to高興做某事；spend……doing……花費(fèi)……做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

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