Question

假如你是來(lái)自于美國(guó)的Jeff，現(xiàn)在在中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)你給在美國(guó)的祖母寫(xiě)一封信，介紹一下你在中國(guó)新結(jié)交的好朋友Wang Lin。

注意：

1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須有如下介紹：

Wang Lin是個(gè)比我外向的人，他對(duì)我很友善，給了我很多幫助。

Wang Lin比我矮，但很喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們現(xiàn)在每周在一起打兩次籃球。

我比Wang Lin聰明一點(diǎn)，但Wang Lin比我用功很多。每次考試，我們都能取得好成績(jī)。

2. 開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，你只需接著寫(xiě)，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮。

3. 詞數(shù)：不少于75。

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend.

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Yours,

Jeff

 

Answer 1

Dear grandma,

How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend. His name is Wang Lin. He is a Chinese boy. He is more outgoing than me, and he is very friendly to me. At school, he often helps me a lot and I like him very much. Although he is shorter than me, he likes sports very much and his favorite sport is basketball. I like basketball, too. We play basketball twice a week. As for study, I think I am a little smarter than him, but he works much harder than me. Both of us can get good grades in every exam.

Yours,

Jeff

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要與好朋友王林的不同，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如more outgoing， is very friendly to，a lot ，twice a week，As for study， a little，Both of us 等短語(yǔ)；文中多次運(yùn)用比較狀語(yǔ)如more outgoing than me, shorter than me，a little smarter than him；讓步狀語(yǔ)從句 Although he is shorter than me。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。