Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分20分）

李梅同學(xué)感到學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)很困難。比如，她很靦腆，不敢在別人面前講英語(yǔ)；記憶單詞時(shí)，記得快，忘得也快；在語(yǔ)法方面也總犯錯(cuò)誤......請(qǐng)你以Amy的名義給她提出一些關(guān)于學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的建議，使她能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

要求：（1）中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

（2）80詞左右；

（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名。

Dear Limei,

I know many students have the same problem like you. ___________________

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Take it easy! If you use the right way of learning English, you are sure to make progress. Best wishes!

Your friend,

Amy

 

Answer 1

Dear Limei,

Most students have the same problem like you. In fact, English is not hard to learn, but the way of learning it is important. First, it’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully and answer the questions actively to practise your spoken English as often as possible in class. Second, it’s better to remember four or five words a day. At the same time, you should do some exercises and try to correct your mistakes in order not to make the same mistakes again and again.

Take it easy! If you use the right way of learning English, you are sure to make progress. Best wishes!

Your friend,

Amy

【解析】

試題分析：短文是一封信，是給李梅提出一些關(guān)于學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的建議，使她能學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。所以句子的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)用第二人稱(chēng)you，要注意句子的要通順，不要漏掉要點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，增加了文章的色彩，如：as often as possible ；It is +名詞或形容詞+to do sth這里it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式。用了一些連詞如：if，but等，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)更加復(fù)雜了，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。