Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)

背景設(shè)定：在中華人民共和國(guó)成立六十周年之際，康康的加拿大朋友Michael想了解康康家鄉(xiāng)的變化。假如你是康康，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給Michael 回一封電子郵件。

要求：1、圍繞以上內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理表述；

2、所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表中的所有方面；

3、詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已給出(不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。

提示詞匯：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通訊), telegram, thanks to, rapidly, comfortable, mobile phone, policy

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to learn the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, _______________________________________

Sincerely,

Kangkang

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　Writing：One possible version：

　　Dear Michael,

　　You want to know the changes about my hometown．You know, great changes have taken placed since 60 years ago．

　　In the past, the living conditions were very poor．There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow．Usually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark house．Most families couldn’t get enough food．The communications were simple and slow．People kept in touch with others far away mainly by letter or telegram．

　　Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recently years．The living conditions are much better and more comfortable．The roads are wide．Some people have their own cars．Most of the people have lived in big new houses．Quite a few adults have mobile phones．Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better．

Sincerely,

Kangkang

　　書(shū)面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　(一)評(píng)分原則：

　　1、本題總分為10分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

　　2、評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

　　(二)評(píng)分細(xì)則：

　　第五檔9－10分：

　　語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)正確，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，基本上無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。能寫(xiě)出有一定變化的句式，如主從復(fù)合句等。中心突出，有實(shí)例。文章有一定長(zhǎng)度。大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確。卷面整潔，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。

　　第四檔7－8分：

　　語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，表達(dá)較清楚，句式正確。有實(shí)例。無(wú)大的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤少，書(shū)面干凈整潔。

　　第三檔5－6分：

　　能較完整的表達(dá)自己的意思，句式基本通順，但有較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。卷面不太干凈。

　　第二檔3－4分：

　　基本沒(méi)有完整的句式，不能表達(dá)正確的意思，但有少量正確的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤嚴(yán)重。卷面不整潔，涂改情況嚴(yán)重。

　　第一檔1－2分：

　　完全不知所云，錯(cuò)誤百出。但鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生動(dòng)手。對(duì)動(dòng)手寫(xiě)的考生與完全正確不動(dòng)筆的學(xué)生要有區(qū)別。