Question

書面表達(dá)。（15分）

假如李明是你的好朋友，根據(jù)提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹李明的業(yè)余愛好。（短文開頭已給出）

提示語：

1. 李明以前是個(gè)電影迷, 一周至少去看兩次電影，有時(shí)租VCD在家里看，最喜歡的影星是姜文；

2. 李明現(xiàn)在的興趣是集郵, 認(rèn)為集郵非常有趣，可以從郵票上學(xué)到很多關(guān)于人物、地點(diǎn)、歷史的知識(shí), 有些舊郵票非常有價(jià)值；

3. 上周五是李明的生日, 他從朋友那里得到了許多郵票，非常高興。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to

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Answer 1

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen. Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it’s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable. Last Friday was Li Ming’s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇利用提綱的給材料作文。本文要寫的材料比較具體，主要是介紹黎明的過去和現(xiàn)在，并介紹李明上周五過生日的事情。寫作時(shí)要注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和過去時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用正確，描述過去時(shí)能正確的使用used todo 的句型。描述現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述上周的情況用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。同時(shí)使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色.如: at least twice a week.，is interested in，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。