Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分10分）

你班上周舉行了”影響我最多的人”的主題班會(huì),每位同學(xué)各抒己見,李明同學(xué)介紹了影響他最多的人是2011年感動(dòng)中國(guó)十大人物之一的”劉偉” 。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中李明同學(xué)發(fā)言的紀(jì)錄,以他的口吻用英文寫一篇短文。

基本信息	1、劉偉, 北京人, 1987年出生。 2、10歲時(shí),因?yàn)槭鹿适�去了雙臂,但他沒(méi)有失去信心。
事例	1、他喜歡游泳,14歲時(shí),他獲得了全國(guó)殘疾人游泳競(jìng)標(biāo)賽(the national championship for the disabled)金牌。 2、19歲時(shí),自學(xué)鋼琴,每天花7個(gè)小時(shí)用腳練習(xí)彈鋼琴。
成就和看法	1、通過(guò)艱苦的努力,他的夢(mèng)想在中國(guó)達(dá)人秀（China’s Got Talent）的舞臺(tái)上實(shí)現(xiàn)了。 2、因此,我認(rèn)為………。(發(fā)揮一到兩句)

注意：

1、必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；

2、第6點(diǎn)必須用1-2句話適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3、詞數(shù)90個(gè)左右,文章開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總次數(shù)。

The person who has influenced me most

Liu Wei is the person who has influenced me most. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The person who has influenced me most

Liu Wei is the person who has influenced me most. Liu Wei was born in Beijing in 1987. When he was only ten, he lost both arms because of an accident. However he didn’t lose heart. He was fond of swimming and at the age of 14, he got a gold medal at the national championship for the disabled. At the age of 19, he started to learn to play the piano and spent 7 hours practicing playing the piano with his feet. Through hard work, he made many achievements. His dream came true on the stage of China’s Got Talent in the end. Liu Wei is the person who I admire. His success proved that “Where there is a will , there is a way.”

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇介紹影響小作者最多的人是2011年感動(dòng)中國(guó)十大人物之一的”劉偉” 。小作者把要求寫的幾點(diǎn)都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時(shí)，小作者還注意了語(yǔ)句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較不錯(cuò)的作文。作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如When he was only ten, he lost both arms because of an accident. However he didn’t lose heart. He was fond of swimming and at the age of 14, he got a gold medal at the national championship for the disabled.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文。