Question

 九年級學生面臨著升學的壓力,很多同學的學習狀況出現(xiàn)了一些問題，在班會課上你和同學們分析了這些問題和產生的原因，并提出了一些相應的解決辦法。請你根據(jù)以下討論結果用英語寫一篇小短文。

Problems	Reasons	Your solutions
壓力大 容易累 上課很難專心…	作業(yè)多 睡眠不夠 ...	1. 2. ...

注意：1.所寫內容必須包括表格中的內容，并有自己的見解和發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)：80左右。

Hello, boys and girls,

We have had a discussion about the problems in our study. Most students       

                         

                                                                              

                                                                               

             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Senior high school entrance examination is coming. Many students are under too much pressure. We spend too much time learning,so we have less sleep and our memories decline.Because of homework and exams,we can't concentrate on studying.It leads us to be easy to be angry and have problems commucating with teachers and parents.Well, what should we do?If we give up,we won't get good grades.Therefore,we should try to make us feel relaxed.For example,when we feel unhappy,we can listen to some soft music or gentle music.It helps a lot.Also,we can go out for a walk and enjoy the fresh air.Do you think they are good ways? Have a try,and you'll feel relaxed.

【解析】

試題分析：1，仔細審題。注意題目的具體要求，明確寫作要求，確立文章要用的時態(tài)。本文應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。2，注意寫作要點，理出寫作框架。本篇書面表達的要點已經(jīng)給出，應注意將提示的內容寫完全，不要遺漏。3，連句成篇，注意語言的連貫和過渡。在寫作中適當使用連詞，會使文章過渡自然。最后還需檢查單詞拼寫、標點符號、大小寫等細節(jié)問題。

【亮點說明】文中使用了一些連接詞如so、because of、if、therefore、and等等，也使用了一些復合句和并列句，這些都為文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。